First Paper

I thought the first paper wasn't that difficult to write.  The most issues I have is my thesis statement because many times I write my paper and it doesn't go with my thesis statement.  I do like the peer review where we got together and talked about our idas for our paper, but I don't like the peer review when you read the papers and check for grammar and such.  I think that you can check for grammar on your own time.  I'd rather have criticism on my argument.